Hey all,
Today I uploaded the second chapter to Superior Girl: Crystal. Following on from the first chapter I released two weeks ago, this second chapter sees Superior Girl smash into the house where the bad guy is holding the girl hostage. You’ll see Superior Girl all cocky as she swaggers into the room and takes a few bullets on the chest where – of course – they deflect harmlessly away.
But things aren’t going to be as easy she she first as the bad guy has a nasty trick up his sleeve!!
Enjoy!
Jon
Curious turn on the story for next week but there’s a mistake:
At end of page 6 last phrase is from another history, the Zora one posted before this.
So do what u have to do, or not…
Good chapter I enjoyed it… the girl can act!
Well done Jon – these stories are getting better and better!
Hey guys, thanks for the comments. Yeah, I like this story and I’m looking forward to releasing the next chapters.
I’ll have a look at that error Albais!
Great turn on this week chapter, and great idea to keep the suspense 2 weeks…
But a mistake again on page 4: 1 text at last vignette is over another so can’t read that last one.
Your turn Jon.
Jon,
Loved it. Just looked at parts 2 and 3 (out today!). Great acting. Would love to see the high quality raw images. Maybe post thumbnails of say 50 pics. Let your subscribers vote on the top 10 and then post those the next update in addition to your normal update.